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Research: It’s So Much Easier than Plot

Research is vital to a compelling story - minor details in the setting, background, culture or historical placement can make or break a narrative. This week's guest poster, Susan Sloate, suggests that research is also a good substitute for plot! What do you think?
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Research: It’s So Much Easier than Plot

By Susan Sloate

Susan Sloate Resarch post graphicI’m sure by now that you as writers already know some of the wonderful benefits of research in writing a novel. The obvious one is that it provides you with information to draw on in creating the world of your story (something that’s important in a lot of novels but critical in historical). It can add flavor. It can make the reader feel like he or she is really there (this is especially true if your research turns up small unknown details readers can drool over).

Research has a lot of other benefits, though, and you ought to consider these as well. For instance, it’s the best possible way to procrastinate, yet still look like you’re working. You can ‘research’ indefinitely, without having to write a single word. “Oh, I’m still doing research,” you can say airily when friends and family wonder why your manuscript still consists of a single blank page. It makes you sound industrious without having to produce anything—the ultimate joy for a novelist. Everyone thinks you’re working your butt off, while you’re just enjoying reading what someone else slaved over. Hah!

It also allows you to blame others (unless you want to do the ultimate trick and nobly take responsibility for any errors). “My research didn’t turn that up” always sounds like the nonfiction writers you consulted in good faith were the ones at fault here. After all, you tried, didn’t you? Is it your fault these dumb scholars didn’t get it right, or left something out?

Research as Plot

“using the research to help you plot”

For me, though, one of the hidden benefits of research is that the more research you do, especially on a historical novel, the less you actually have to come up with creatively in the way of plot. Seriously. If you can manage it—and the best historical writers do—you can blend what you find in your research with your characters to create what feels like a seamless story tapestry. And the beauty of it is that you therefore have less to invent on your own, because you’re using the research to help you plot.

Want an example? My latest novel, FORWARD TO CAMELOT: 50th Anniversary Edition (co-authored with Kevin Finn), is about the JFK assassination (a timely subject this fall, with the 50th anniversary of that event). I will admit we spent years researching this one, but I believe in the process, we turned up stuff that became gold in the story.

For instance, we learned in studying JFK’s life that his father Joe was worried that Jack’s various illnesses, especially his Addison’s disease (a weakness of the adrenal glands), could hit the headlines and destroy his political career. And while an aide always carried a bag of medicines when JFK was out in public, what would happen if he ever got separated from them?

Turns out Joe Sr. had considered that possibility. The solution? He took safe-deposit boxes in bank vaults all over the country and stashed medications for Jack in all of them. The idea was that no matter where he was in the US, if he ever ran out of medication or got separated from that black medical bag, he could still get fresh refills, and most important, it could be kept a secret.

When we learned that, we knew we had to use it. I mean, how fantastic is that for a plot point? An incapacitated president desperate for more meds but can’t tell anyone? LOVE it!

“NOBODY who has ever written fiction about JFK has ever used that”

So in our story, at one point all three of our intrepid heroes, in terrible danger, manage to get to a bank vault with one of those special safe-deposit boxes. NOBODY who has ever written fiction about JFK has ever used that. But we who had done the research—we could, and did.

We Couldn't Have Made It Up

I’ll tell you honestly that we couldn’t have made this stuff up. Some of it is so outrageous, no one would ever believe it. (And we wouldn’t have dared write it.) But finding that basis in fact gave us the confidence to go out on a limb, because we knew it had actually happened. And because it was fresh material, stuff no one else had woven into fiction before us, it made us look like creative geniuses.

Research is a Two Edged Sword

This is, of course, a two-edged sword. For years after the publication of the first edition of CAMELOT in 2003, we received wonderful compliments about our original and exciting plot. People would point out story points they especially enjoyed and ask how in the world we came up with them. And we would have to (painfully, at times) admit that actually, we hadn’t: it was true, and came out of our research. All we did was fit it into the framework of our story.

Funny, they would then look disappointed and murmur something about what a good job we’d done with the research. It somehow never sounded as enthusiastic as their compliments on our plot. Ah, well.

On one hand, it’s never fun demurring from a sincere compliment. On the other, it’s amazing how many wonderful ideas you can get from delving into the research. Ideas you can use to push your plot forward in a unique way, because you’ve got the facts to back it up.

Yeah, it takes hours from the actual writing.

But on the other side of the coin, when you let the facts drive your story, think how many hours it saves.

Ever turned up something this special in your own research? Share your thoughts in the comments below - and share this post with your friends, too!

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Ideas for Writing | Choosing the Setting of a Story

Readers generally absorb the setting of a story subconsciously - unless it grates with what they are familiar with! Choosing the setting of a story and accurately communicating it to the reader is, as How to be an Author guest poster, Jeanette Hornby, illustrates, "fundamental in establishing the mood" and believability of the wider story.
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Choosing the Setting of a Story

by Jeanette Hornby

Jeanette Hornby - setting of a story post graphicThe setting for a novel includes the historical time period, culture, and location of the story, and is fundamental in establishing the mood and scene of coming events. Where stories discuss such subjects as society and environment, the setting is extremely significant. In some instances, it is possible for the setting to become a character itself.

If the story is woven around an actual event then the setting can be pivotal to the plot. The consequences of the event are ‘real’ and will affect how we write about the fictional characters and their responses to the incident. We cannot ignore the historical outcome if the story is set in a real place or time.

The setting may be a real location or a fictional one. It is even possible to use both fictional and real places in a story.

Real Locations, Fictional Places

In my novels, I use real locations but add fictional places within them. This allows me to use historical landmarks and events while taking the story in any direction I choose. I find it easier to begin with real places rather than make up completely fictional ones though this may change in the future.

My first two novels are set in my home-town in Western Australia and the setting should have been easy to describe, but the stories are set in the ’70s and ’80s, respectively, and things have changed since then. I had to retrieve old memories, photos, and scrapbooks to help me ‘re-live’ those days.

“how they dealt with the bigotry and turmoil of Australian life in those eras”

The setting was important in these two novels because the subject matter centred on the lives of my characters (children of Italian migrants) and how they dealt with the bigotry and turmoil of Australian life in those eras. The small country town in which I lived was just one example of the migrant struggle for acceptance in Australia at the time, and revealed the changing face of Australia, so was crucial to the story.

Research

The hours of research were worth the effort and I rather enjoyed taking a walk down memory-lane. Thankfully, I am familiar with the ‘Australian-isms’ and was able to set the scenes rather easily and authentically.

All my novels, thus far, are set in Australia where I have lived all my life. It is often easier to write about a place that you know because you already have a ‘feel’ for it, but good research can also help the writer with this. Asking questions is vital.

We are privileged to live in this high-tech age where information is readily accessible. My third novel, Candy’s Man, is set in Sydney – a place I have never been – but I was able to research the area on the internet and even gained visual access of certain streets and places with Google Maps. This worked well for my contemporary romance tale.

Characterisation vs Setting

The characters in this novel were the focal point of the story and therefore, the setting was not as significant, but it was still important to set the scene. From a cruise in the Caribbean, to the city of Sydney, it was vital to take the reader on a journey along with the characters. I feel the description of popular Sydney landmarks helped convey the uniqueness of Australia to the reader.

As some of my characters are American in this novel and their culture and language differ somewhat, I was able to use the knowledge of my American editor to find the discrepancies. You can never have too much information, and it all adds to setting the scene.

My current Work-In-Progress, Grapevines and Gum Trees, is set in a historical town in Western Australia, but the actual place and residence of the characters is fictional. This allows me once again to use historical landmarks and events while shaping the story as I see fit.

The story is set in the mid ’80s when ‘progress’ had not yet fully encroached on the small country town. I wanted to portray the area as the tranquil place I remember from my youth.
Once again, I use my knowledge of the area to my advantage, describing landmarks that are well-known in the area. Hopefully, my descriptions give all readers a ‘feel’ of this wonderful country in which I live.

Choosing the setting of a story clearly makes a fundamental contribution and often drives the story line within a novel. How do you choose the setting for your stories? Share your thoughts in the comments below - and share with your friends, too!

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Research and Writing: How Skeletons in the Ancestral Cupboard Fuel the Creative Process

Research and Writing

From science fiction to soap opera, good background research is so important to create the canvas on which to paint a novel. In today's how to be an author guest post, Scott Skipper shows how research and writing go together, using the discoveries he made while studying his genealogy. Three novels have arisen from this so far!
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The Ancestral Cupboard

by Scott Skipper

Scott Skipper writing and research feature picIn 1997 I began researching my genealogy and quickly discovered that I come from colorful stock. While looking for traces of my surname, all over the internet I encountered references to Indian chiefs, interracial marriages, dubious affairs, hog rustling, homebred militias and always more Indians. Some years later I went to the Family History Library in Salt Lake City and stumbled across a series of documents that proved it was all true. One of my earliest ancestors in the New World shunned white society, married an Indian maiden and became a Chief Man of the Nottoway Indians. His name continued to appear on land and court records for twenty years.

That is a story that was itching to be told, but to do so I required intimate knowledge of the times, people and places. So I delved into the history of the Nottoways—more correctly known as the Cheroenhaka. Nottoway is a derisive term used by their enemies, it means snakes. Some of what I discovered truly astounded me. This was not the textbook version of the period at all. I had to write this story but the character development of my distant ancestors gave me pause. Did I really want to claim to the world that I descend from renegade philanderers and duplicitous wild Indians? Well, of course I did.

So, "Family Traits" was born. It is the tale of three generations of my Skipper grandfathers cohabiting and corrupting the Indians; conniving and conspiring against the Colonial Governor, and continually running afoul of the law and their wives.

Within the Cupboard

To concoct a viable story I pulled all the documents together that I had collected over fifteen years and hunted for a thread that could tie the historical characters to one another and situate them plausibly in the correct times and places without taking too many liberties with fact and without merely producing a sterile genealogy. I had been to London and visited the corner of Whitehall where Charles I lost his head—this seemed a good starting point and the English Civil War a fine motive for decamping to the New World. I went to Barbados to look for footprints and to get a sense of the route that the colonists followed from England to Virginia. Naturally, I needed to see Jamestown and Williamsburg and to see the lay of the land where the events in my tale actually took place. Finally, I had to see the swamp where my ancestor took his Indian family to protect them from the depredations of the white settlers—sadly some ecological miscreant has since drained the swamp. At some point during the research phase of "Family Traits", and the subsequent "In the Blood", I visited every place described in the action of either story.

History

Between trips I devoted a great deal of time to reading sixteenth and seventeenth century accounts of the Virginia and North Carolina colonies, various shipwrecks and passenger lists. I owe much to the Gutenberg Project for free access to arcane books from the period and I regret that I did not include a bibliography in "Family Traits" although I did append a glossary. I even found a fragment of the Cheroenhaka lexicon which I used sparingly for the names of invented characters and to add a bit of Indian flavor. History itself gave me an excellent villain in the person of Lieutenant Governor Alexander Spotswood of Virginia who made converting the Cheroenhaka to Christianity his personal and cruel crusade.

So, over the months, a messy collection of deeds, wills, court transcripts and family lore coalesced, with false starts, blind alleys, ruthless paring of deadwood and infinite proofreading, into a plausible, if slightly off kilter, tale of three generations of troublemakers named George Skipper who carried the genes for a prominent nose and a wandering eye.

Family Secrets Revealed

"In the Blood" created a different sort of conflict. This was the life story of an ancestor who can be definitively linked, not only to me, but also to all my living paternal cousins. To tell the truth about this complicated man was to risk offending people with whom I enjoy taking Thanksgiving. But the truth must be told, so I soldiered onward and spilled the beans about four wives, sixteen known offspring and the suspicion of others. The timeline of George Washington Skipper's life was fairly easy to follow including his Confederate Civil War career thanks to the memoir of his brigadier general, Author Middleton Manigault — the appendix of which became the inspiration for my third novel, "The Hundred Years Farce".

The specter of polygamy was not the major issue in telling Washington's story. The complexion of wife number four, with whom he resided the longest, was a deeply guarded family secret. When I had an elementary school assignment to make a family tree, my grandfather refused to broach the subject. In 1997 when my cousin revealed to me the identity of my great-great-grandfather, he neglected to mention it—we are both descended from wife number three so he could be forgiven for not thinking it germane. Regardless of how we view interracial marriage today, in Reconstruction era South Carolina it was not only scandalous, it was grounds for lynching, and of course, so was polygamy. Washington Skipper, as he was known, kept his secrets for a hundred years. I doubt if he can ever forgive me for letting the cat out of the bag.

Are you brave enough to do this kind of research and writing? Use the comments below to give your reactions to letting the skeletons out of the family cupboards. And share this post with your friends, too, using the handy "shere" buttons liberally distributed around this page!

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Writing Genres | Changing Genre from Fact to Fiction |

Writing Genres


Writers write, yes? Yes, certainly ... but at the same time, no. As a person who has made her living writing articles for government publications, R L Morgan has vast experience of writing for both sides of the coin. In today's How to be an Author guest post, she outlines the challenges in switching writing genres from factual commentator to writer of fiction.
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Changing Genres

by R L Morgan

R L Morgan personal writing genres graphicSome of us who have chosen to write fiction come from a variety of places. And by "a variety of places" I'm not referring to a physical location, I'm referring to our writing experiences.

There are some of us who have enjoyed writing since we were a child, and each year by writing something in school it improved. For some of us, it continued until we graduated college and began working. Some of us entered the work force taking jobs which required us to write, whether it was procedures, handbooks/manuals, or news stories. But all of these are non-fiction, and each one has a set of "rules" which need to be followed to write something well enough to be acceptable.

As for myself, while my regular job did not require me to write, for eleven years I wrote articles [commentaries/viewpoints] of what was happening in my community and my feelings about it. When I started to write these items my writing skills were not honed, I didn’t have my ideas organized in a tight manner, although my writing had been informative. By the time I’d written my last item, I’d become quite adept at it.

When I started to write fiction, I somehow drifted to writing a contemporary romance story with a paranormal element running through the storyline, but after almost 9 years I still hadn’t completed it. That is, until someone suggested I should write for a much younger audience; which is what I did, cumulating in my first YA Paranormal/Time Travel/First Kiss romance novel, entitled “I Kissed a Ghost.”

A New Set of Rules

Anyway, making the transition from non-fiction to fiction I've had to learn a new set of rules in how to write. Most of these involved dialogue, showing not telling; where before I just told. I now had to learn about the use of tags. I had to learn not to be overly descriptive of something, but allow my reader to create the image for themselves in their minds. In the beginning I found it hard to break my old writing habits. Now I'm finding myself with these habits essentially gone. The biggest issue I still have and am trying to get a good handle on, is POV [Point of View]. Regardless of what's happening or being said it has to be in one's character's perspective, and you can't flip-flop between two characters within a scene, there needs to be a transition from one character to another.

All these things have helped me mould myself into the author I’m today. I've also learned there are additional rules within a genre depending on the sub-genre you've decided to write in. These rules apply to the dialogue spoken which needs to be true to the time period you're writing in, as well as how your characters are dressed, and their titles if any, as is the case with the regencies sub-genre of romance novels.

So as you can see writing is not mere a string of words you put together, there are rules which need to be followed if you’re to be well received by your readers.

A very informative post from Robin Morgan. Share any thoughts and feedback in the comments below - and share this post with your friends, using the buttons liberally sprinked around the screen!